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Jhon Hakjovick is a middleman of the earth's future, so your job is to talk with God and the Devil about the future of humanity. Jhon has in mind that he is strong enough to do this job and well prepared. He keeps in mind that if he commits some mistake, it will be catastrophic for all people all over the world.
So, first, Jon summons God, and God appears to him, and Jon asks some questions below: Hey, God has the power to change the course of humanity, so we need your help to protect us from disgrace. As you know, the Apocalypse is coming, and we need to know what'll be your attitude about it and how we'll fight against it.
God answered: There is no reason to be afraid; everything is going to be right. Just believe in me. When the time comes, I'll give you the power for everyone in this world to handle every fact that can be catastrophic. Jon Hijokovik continues his arguments: We human beings are looking for truth, so no matter how long it'll take, we need to know the truth. Are there other viable worlds to live in this galaxy or not? Just in case!!
God answer: obviously it is correct, then I can tell you in advance that the stone cabalistic is hidden in the core of the earth. That cabalistic stone has the power to solve all the earth's problems. Jhon: but, Lord, as we have known, the temperature is so high there that it is impossible to get there.
When the time comes, I'll give ten people the power to get there by the power of their minds.
Jhon hesitates.
The last question Jhon asked was: Who has more power in this kingdom, you or the devil? Because many times we lose faith in you!!!
God: Do not dare me, your hypocrite. For every world that I have created, I have cultivated love. But your was my worst creation ever. So I am a merciful God, for while keep in mind this letters (agck vs kkt1) will open the new portal.
I mean, when apocalypce comes, these secret letters will transform you into a true soldier mine.
Jhon did not understand those words very well.
Now Jhon Hakjovik summoning the devil and he appears in form of a dragon.
Jon asked: Which one has more power, you or God?
Dragon said. I dedicate all my time seeking to bring more and more souls to me. But, I believe now that the fight is near to the end. My purpose here is simple:rescue the most souls from the light of God. I am not responsible for the catastrophic things that have happened on earth . That you call for God is a liar. I am the true light in this world.
Jhon carry on the conversation. Show me your power now and create a new form of life different from us? Probably, you do not know how this world was crowded in the old days. The circumstances that you know are not clearly explained. The bridge that can take you to the other side is narrow.
Have you heard about the cadovarius element?
This property makes every person full of energy until the point of sustaining yourselves in every part of this galaxy. I have kept it to myself until now. But the time has come. Tell for all that you represent, I'll give this cadovarius element at the right moment. So Jhon, the choice is yours. Watch out. I beg to you!! God is a fake wise that has ruined your life until now. In this way, I put your thoughts in check. Who will you believe in me or in God?
Jhon finished the conversation and broadcasted all information of bouth for humanity. Giving for all of them the duality ideas. Who human being will choose God for save the future or Devil?


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Logan.Ashby
A fiction text.
Jhon Hakjovick is a the middleman of the earth's future , so your . His job is to talk with God and the Devil about the future of humanity. Jhon has in mind believes that he is strong enough to do this job and is well prepared. He keeps in mind knows that if he commits some mistake makes mistakes , then it will be catastrophic for all people everyone all over the world. So , first, Jon summons God, and God appears to him, and Jon asks some the following questions below : Hey, God has the power to change the course of humanity, so we need your help to protect us from disgrace.

As you know, the Apocalypse is coming, and we need to know what
'll be your attitude will be about it and how we'll fight against it. God answered: There is no reason to be afraid; everything is going to be right alright . Just believe in me. When the time comes, I'll give you the power for everyone in this world to handle every fact everything that can could be catastrophic. Jon Hijokovik continues continued his arguments argument : We As human beings , we are looking for truth, so no matter how long it'll take, we need to know the truth. Are there other viable worlds to live in this galaxy or not? Just in case!! God answer answered : obviously it It is correct, then so I can tell you in advance that the stone cabalistic (I don't know what this would be) is hidden in the core of the earth. That cabalistic stone has the power to solve all the earth's problems. Jhon: but, But Lord, as we have known, the temperature is so high there that it is impossible to get there. When the time comes, I'll give ten people the power to get there by the power of their minds. Jhon hesitates.

The last question Jhon asked was: Who has more power in this kingdom, you or the devil? Because
many times we lose we have lost faith in you several times !!! God: Do not dare me, your hypocrite. For every world that I have created, I have cultivated love. But your was my worst creation ever. So I am a merciful God, for while keep in mind this these letters (agck vs kkt1) will open the new portal. I mean To clarify , when apocalypce the apocalypse comes, these secret letters will transform you into a true soldier of mine. Jhon did not understand those words very well. Now Jhon Hakjovik summoning summoned the devil and he appears appeared in the form of a dragon. Jon asked: Which one has more power, you or God? The Dragon said . : I dedicate all my time seeking to bring more and more souls to me. But, I believe now that the fight is near to the end. My purpose here is simple: rescue the most souls from the light of God. I am not responsible for the catastrophic things that have happened on earth . That whom you call for God is a liar. I am the true light in this world. Jhon carry carried on the conversation. Show me your power now and create a new form of life that is different from us ? Probably, you . You probably do not know how crowded this world was crowded in the old days. The circumstances that you know are not clearly explained. The bridge that can take you to the other side is narrow. Have you heard about the cadovarius element? This property makes every person full of fills everyone with energy , until the point of sustaining yourselves themselves in every part of this galaxy. I have kept it to myself until now . But , but the time has come. Tell for all that you represent, I'll give this cadovarius element at the right moment. So Jhon, the choice is yours. Watch out. I beg to you!! " God is a fake wise that figure who, until now, you believe has ruined your life until now . In this way By doing so , I put challenge your thoughts in check . Who Whom will you believe in : me or in God? " Jhon finished the conversation and broadcasted both viewpoints to all information of bouth for humanity. Giving for all of Give them the duality opposing ideas. Who human being will Will humanity choose God for to save the future or Devil? (I was not sure of the correct subject in some of the sentences, so I made some assumptions on context. Some sentences were correct but awkward, so I tried to make them more natural sounding.)
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