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The kittens
This week will complete 3 weeks that I adopted kittens and I'm very happy. My boyfriend was on the way to my house, when he noticed some kittens on the sidewalk. He take a picture and send to me, I'm felt very comotive and say to take them. I got attached so fast and we gave up from adoption and we decided stay with kittens.
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The kittens
This week
it
will
complete
be
3 weeks
that
since
I adopted kittens and I'm very happy. My boyfriend was on the way to my house, when he noticed some kittens on the sidewalk. He
take
took
a picture
of them
and
send
sent
it
to me, I
'm
felt very
(
comotive
is not a word;perhaps you mean emotional?)
and
say
said
to take them. I got attached
so
fast
and
very
quickly,
so
we gave up
from
on
adoption and
we
decided
stay
with
to
keep
the
kittens.
Posted
The kittens
This week
it
will
complete
be
3 weeks
that
since
I
have
adopted kittens and I'm very happy. My boyfriend was on the way to my house, when he noticed some kittens on the sidewalk. He
take
took
a picture and
send
sent
them
to me, I
'm
felt very
comotive
emotional
and
say
told
him
to take them. I got attached
so
very
fast and we gave up
from
on
the idea of
adoption and
we
decided
stay
with
to
keep
the
kittens.
Posted
The kittens
This week will
complete
have
been
3 weeks
that
since
I adopted kittens
,
and I'm very happy. My boyfriend was on the way to my house, when he noticed some kittens on the sidewalk. He
take
took
a picture and
send
sent
to me, I
'm
felt very comotive and
say
said
to take them. I got attached so fast and we gave up
from
adoption and
we
decided stay with kittens.
Posted
The kittens
This week
,
it
will
complete
be
3 weeks
that
since
I adopted kittens and I'm very happy. My boyfriend was on the way to my house, when he noticed some kittens on the sidewalk. He
take
took
a picture and
send
sent
it
to me,
and
I
'm
felt very comotive
(maybe you mean comfortable?)
and
say
said
to take them. I got attached so fast
and
,
so
we gave up
from
adoption
adopting
and
we
decided
to
stay with
the
kittens.
Posted
The kittens
This week will
complete
mark
3 weeks
that
since
I adopted kittens and I'm very happy. My boyfriend was on the way to my house, when he noticed some kittens on the sidewalk. He
take
took
a picture and
send
sent
it
to me
,
.
I
'm
felt very comotive and
say
said
to take them. I got attached so fast and we gave up
from
on
adoption and
we
decided
stay
with
to
keep
the
kittens.
Posted