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12 Saturday 2021


Today I woke up at 7 am. I had a shower. After showering. I went to the supermarket with my mom. We go back home. She went to the rural area. I took an immersion during the day. Using apps like Duolingo, Busuu, Lingq, websites, listening to music, and watching videos and series. I think cool, But I don’t understand much, But I can understand some things, and, this is cool for me. I like that. I’m staying alone at home today.
I have much time and then, I want to learn. Some things are easy, but others, difficult.
I had rice and chicken for lunch. And later, I washed my clothes, but it’s not a good day today, it’s raining.

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I like the short sentences. Feels like I'm reading a sweet poem or something. Keep it up and enjoy the journey.
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Linda.Quayle
Saturday 12 Saturday June 2021

Today I woke up at 7 am. I had a shower. After showering
. , I went to the supermarket with my mom. We go went back home. She Then she went off to the rural area. I took an did some language immersion during the day. Using apps like Duolingo, Busuu, Lingq, websites, listening to music, and watching videos and series. I think it's cool , But . I don’t understand much, But but I can understand some things, and , this is cool for me. I like that. I’m staying alone at home today.
I have
much a lot of time and then, I want to learn. Some things are easy, but others , I find difficult.
I had rice and chicken for lunch. And later, I washed my clothes, but it’s not a good day
for that today, as it’s raining.

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etm42
12 Saturday 2021
Today I woke up at 7 am. I had a shower. After showering . , I went to the supermarket with my mom. We go came back home. She Then she went out to the rural area countryside . I took an immersion during the day . Using , using apps like Duolingo, Busuu, Lingq, websites, listening to music, and watching videos and series. I think cool , "Cool , But but I don’t understand much , ." But I can understand some things, and , this is cool for me. I like that. I’m staying alone at home today. I have much time and then a lot of time , so I want to learn. Some things are easy, but others, difficult. I had rice and chicken for lunch. And later, I washed my clothes, but it’s not a good day today , ; it’s raining.

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