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My Second Essay (04/08/2020)

Hi everyone!
I comeback and I will talk to you what happend with my life today.
I woke up, took a shower and I washed my hair. How I always do, I studied the subjects (Math, English and History) today.
I watch a amazing miniseries called "Self Made" in portuguese is "A vida e a história de Madame CJ Walker" talk about the first womam who became a millionaire in the united states and at the film this woman confront many thing like racism, betrayal and life difficulties. She pass for many obstacles to get where she got and I really recommend for you all watch this miniseries. This woman revolutionized.

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This sounds like an interesting series. Is this available on Netflix?
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Wow. Where do you watch it ?
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My Second Essay (04/08/2020)
Hi everyone!
I
comeback have come back and I will talk to you about what happend with happened in my life today.
I woke up, took a shower and
I washed my hair. How That's what I always do, I studied the subjects (Math Maths , English and History ) today.
I
watch a watched an amazing miniseries series called "Self Made" in portuguese Portuguese is "A vida Vida e a história de Madame CJ Walker" talk which talked about the first womam woman who became a millionaire in the united states United States and at in the film this woman confront confronted many thing difficulties like racism, betrayal betrayals and life difficulties struggles . She pass for passed many obstacles to get reach where she got and I really recommend for you all watch this miniseries seriess . This woman revolutionized an era .
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My Second Essay (04/08/2020)
Hi everyone!
I
comeback am back and I will talk to you about what happend with happened in my life today.
I woke up, took a shower and
I washed my hair. How I always do, I studied the subjects ( Math, English and History ) today . I watch a also watched an amazing miniseries mini-series called "Self Made" , in portuguese is it's "A vida e a história de Madame CJ Walker" talk . It talks about the first womam woman who became a millionaire in the united states United States and at in the film this series the woman confront confronted many thing things like racism, betrayal and other life difficulties. She pass for got past many obstacles to get where she got and . I really recommend for you all to watch this miniseries mini-series . This The woman revolutionized advocates revolution .
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My Second Essay (04/08/2020)
Hi everyone!
I
comeback 'm back and I will talk to you what happend happened with my life today.
I woke up, took a shower and I washed my hair.
How I did what I always do, I studied the subjects (Math, English and History) today.
Then, I watch a watched an amazing miniseries called "Self Made . " in portuguese In Portuguese it is "A vida e a história de Madame CJ Walker . " talk It talks about the first womam woman who became a millionaire in the united United states and at . In the film , this woman confront many thing like racism, betrayal and life difficulties. She pass for passed many obstacles to get where she got and . I really recommend for you all to watch this miniseries. This woman revolutionized is a revolutionary .
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