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Education Today and in The Future

The world is advancing every day and it really freaks me out. We don't know what can happen tomorrow. Chances are the schools will use more technology and students will do all of their exams on the smartphone.

The more time passes, the more different our world gets. These days, students are doing their tasks on the internet because of Covid-19. It shows us that the students can do everything without go to school. However, I think we need face-to-face classes, nevertheless. When I was a student I loved go to my school and I wouldn't like it to change.

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Attending school is more than just for an academic education, it also is for social education and interaction. While the internet has certainly opened up the world of education, allowing possibilities that could only be dreamt about a few years ago, I agree with you as it would not bode well for a healthy future society. We will be in a world of well-educated, lonely people who have absolutely no idea how to interact with their fellow human beings. A recipe for a dystopian future if ever there was one.
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draenog.jon
Education Today and in The the Future
The world is advancing every day , and it really freaks me out. We don't know what ( can )/[may] happen tomorrow. Chances are the , schools will use more technology and students will do all of their exams on the a smartphone.

The more time passes, the more
( different our world gets. )/[our world changes.] These days, students are doing their tasks work on the internet because of Covid-19. It ( shows us )/[demonstrates] that the students can do everything without go actually (going to )/[attending] school. However, I think we still need face-to-face classes , nevertheless. When I was a student , I loved to go to my school and I wouldn't like it that to change.
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leosmith
Education Today and in The the Future
The world is advancing every day , and it really freaks me out. We don't know what can could happen tomorrow. Chances are the , schools will use more technology , and students will do all of their exams on the smartphone smartphones . The more time passes, the more different our world gets changes . These days, students are doing their tasks on the internet because of Covid-19. It shows us that the students they can do everything they need to do without go going to school. However, I think we need face-to-face classes , nevertheless . When I was a student , I loved go going to my school , and I wouldn't like it to change would never change that .
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Excellent work - my comments are suggestions only.
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