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Public policies: Mothers ask for help

Nowadays the modern habits and the parent absent have been the main reasons for the overweight in children. The difficulty in balancing life and work, specially in mother workers, has a huge correlation to understand this phenomenon.

First and foremost, in the last ten years our lives have been changed on the deeper way, the internet advance contributed to a remarkable change in our society. The number of women who started on the workplace increased and the housework and the childcare were transferred to other institutions as kind garden, schools or relatives and it caused the reduce in handmade food and healthy food available on the western family’s tables. In the last decades women used to stay at home with the children.

In Brazil, approximately 40% of the families are managed by women, almost the majority of them act in a low pay occupation. Besides the enormous effort for these people to organize the work balance, they do not get good condition to offer to their children enough food and quality of the time. To compensate of long hours with commuting and the poor salaries these families used to buy cheap and unhealthy food. Additionally, in our country does not have public policies enough to create a place with social justice. Canada, for instance has more infrastructure to think about women and children. We can not thing in Economic and social development without in how to conquer the equality and deep issues in our world.

Lastly, the children oversize is just one of all symptoms in our modern society, the technology advance needs to hand in hand with the humanity issues. Before we conquer mars or other planet, we should see the people who is in our side.

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Public policies: Mothers ask for help
Nowadays the , modern habits and the parent absent absence of parents have been the main reasons for the overweight obesity in children. The difficulty in balancing life and work, specially in mother workers working mothers , has a is of huge correlation to understand importance for understanding this phenomenon.

First and foremost, in the last ten years our lives have been
changed on changing profoundly, the deeper way, advance of the internet advance contributed to a remarkable change in our society. The number of women who started on the workplace increased and the housework and the childcare were transferred to other institutions such as kind garden kindergarden , schools , or relatives and it , which caused the reduce in a reduction of handmade food and healthy food available on the western family’s tables table . In the last previous decades , women used to stay at home with the children.

In Brazil, approximately 40% of the families are managed by women, almost the majority of them act in a low pay occupation. Besides the enormous effort for these people to organize the work balance, they
do are not get in good condition to offer to their children enough food and quality of the qualitative time. To compensate of long hours with of commuting and the poor salaries , these families used to buy cheap and unhealthy food. Additionally, in our country does not have enough public policies enough to create a place with of social justice. Canada, for instance , has more infrastructure to think about women and children. We can not thing in Economic cannot think of economic and social development without in considering how to conquer the equality inequality and deep issues in of our world.

Lastly,
the children oversize child obesity is just one of all many symptoms in of our modern society , the . The advance of technology advance needs to go hand in hand with the humanity 's issues. Before we conquer mars Mars or other planet planets , we should see notice the people who is in on our side.
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