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The best country that I´ve visited

In 2017 my husband and I traveled to Japan. It was absolutely out from my confort zone but this trip was fulfill of meaningful. I remembered that I saw a world map that the Asia was in the center of the world. It make me surprised because I grew up seeing Europe in the center of the world and this changed my perspective about the things. Here in the Western world almost all of the places have too much noise and honestly it get me nervous and sometimes anxiety. On the other hand Japan is so quiet, people usually walking on the streets so calm and quite. For instance, scarcely here in Brazil, specially in the big cities as São Paulo, you´ll see people so calm doing the things, for me the silence is absolutely amazing. After the silent place, the food from Japan is tremendous delicious, we took a photo and I see it every day and I miss this. In the next years I intend to visit Japan again and I hope that this trip will be so good as the first one.

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In 2017 my husband and I traveled travelled to Japan. It was absolutely out from of my confort comfort zone , but this trip was fulfill of both fulfilling and meaningful. I remembered seeing that I saw , on a world map that the , Asia was in the center centre of the world. It make surprised me surprised because I grew up seeing Europe in as the center centre of the world and this changed my perspective about the things. Here in the Western world , almost all of the places have are too much noise noisy, and honestly it get makes me nervous and sometimes gives me anxiety. On the other hand , Japan is so quiet, people usually walking walk on the streets so calm calmly and quite quietly . For instance, scarcely rarely here in Brazil, specially especially in the big cities such as São Paulo, will you ´ll see people so calm when doing the things, for me the silence is absolutely amazing. After the silent place silence , the food from Japan is tremendous also tremendously delicious , we . We took a photo and I see it every day and , I miss this Japan . In the next few years I intend to visit Japan again , and I hope that this next trip will be so as good as the first one.
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