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Technology Impacts

The technology advancement brought astonishing improvements to our lives. However, one of the drawbacks of these changes is the products that were rendered obsolete by them. One good example is the Walkie Talkie. This object was used to communicate within short and middle distances, and it had a battery that used to last some hours. However, with the smartphones, they were replaced.

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The technology Technological advancement has brought astonishing improvements to our lives. However, one of the drawbacks of these changes is the [number of] products that were rendered obsolete by them this . One good example is the Walkie Talkie. This object device was used to communicate within over short and middle distances, and it had a battery that used to last some hours. However, with the arrival of smartphones, they were have been [ replaced ]/[superseded] .
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