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I went for a walk on sunday afternoon and the weather was pleasant: partly sunny, calm wind and so on, but it looked like it was going to rain. Anyway, I kept walking to a planned place in order to have a snack. However, i was lost because had walked more than should and, in short, i had needed to walk for another fifteen minutes to get back.

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I went for a walk on sunday Sunday afternoon and the weather was pleasant: partly sunny, calm wind gentle breeze and so on, but yet it looked like it was going to rain. Anyway, I kept walking to a planned place in order to have a snack. However, i I [realised I] was lost because I had walked more further than I should have and, in short, i had I needed to walk for another fifteen minutes [just] to get back.
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A day
I went for a walk on sunday afternoon and the weather was pleasant: partly sunny, calm wind and so on, but it looked like it was going to rain. Anyway, I kept walking to a planned place in order to have a snack. However, i I was lost because had walked more than should and, in short, i I had needed to walk for another fifteen minutes to get back.
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