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Global Climate Change

We know that our planet is suffering climate change. So, is necessary to acknowledge the necessity of action to reduce the damage. There are people think only big companies can to do something to salve our planet. I believe that possible to minimize the negative effects with some action on our rotine.
It´s a good idea to reduce the use of plastic bags. You can to carry your own plastic bags when you go shopping. There are supermarkets that doesn´t supply plastic bags. They sell reusable bags and motivate their customer to reduce the use of plastic bags. At begin, there was a big discussion about supermarket doesn´t to supply that type of bag. These days, it´s comum and help to take care about the environment.
Actually, many human activities cause global climate change. Big industries are still the most polluting. Government polices must to avoid the increase in the greenhouse effect. The companies that doesn´t to respect the law must be punished.
In summary, the environment needs the help of all of us to repair all the damage it has suffered. Just do your portion and contribute for a better future. Together, we can do it!

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Global Climate Change
We know that our planet is suffering from climate change. So, it is necessary to acknowledge the necessity of action to reduce the damage. There are people who think only big companies can to do something to salve save our planet. I believe that it is possible to minimize the negative effects with some action on changes in our rotine.
It´s a good idea to reduce the use of plastic bags. You can
to carry your own plastic bags when you go shopping. There are supermarkets that doesn´ don' t supply plastic bags. They sell reusable bags and motivate their customer to reduce the use of plastic bags. At begin the begining , there was a big discussion about supermarket doesn´t to supply that regarding supermarkets not supplying this type of bag. These days, it´s comum a common and help helpful way to take care about of the environment.
Actually, many human activities
cause global impact the climate change . Big industries are still the most polluting. Government polices must to avoid the increase in increment of the greenhouse effect. The companies that doesn´ don' t to respect the law must be punished.
In summary, the environment needs
the our help of all of us to repair all the damage it has suffered. Just do your portion part and contribute for a better future. Together, we can do it!
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Global Climate Change
We know that our planet is suffering climate change. So , it is necessary to acknowledge the necessity of action to reduce the damage. There are people who think that only big companies can to do something to salve save our planet. I believe that it is possible to minimize the negative effects with some action on changes to our rotine routine .
It´s a good idea to reduce the use of plastic bags. You can to carry your own plastic bags when you go shopping. There are supermarkets that
doesn don ´t supply plastic bags. They sell reusable bags and motivate their customer to reduce the use of plastic bags. At begin the beginning , there was a big discussion about supermarket doesn´t to whether or not supermarkets supply that type of bag. These days, it´s comum common and help helps to take care about the environment.
Actually, many human activities cause global climate change. Big industries are still the most polluting. Government polices must
aim to avoid the increase in the greenhouse effect. The companies that doesn don ´t to respect the law must be punished.
In summary, the environment needs the help of all of us to repair all the damage it has suffered. Just do your
portion part and contribute for a better future. Together, we can do it!
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