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My birthday

Yesterday was my birthday. I did thirty five years old. This was a special day for me but I didn't receive any gift. I don't tell that I didn't felt sad about It. When I was a child my parents didn't have money for gifts, so it's a common situation in my life.
However, I tryed have a agradable day. I did a cake of lemon and some breads. It was delicious. Everybody liked it and I felt happy. In the afternoon, I went to hairdresser thinking that would be a nice idea , but in the next morning my hair looks terrible. I felt sad about it and never I'll go back there again.
In conclusion, there are good birthdays and bad birthdays. We must to enjoy all the moments of our lifes and to try to do the best for our days. I hope that my next birthday be wonderful.

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My birthday Birthday
Yesterday was my birthday . , I did turned thirty - five years old. This was a special day for me , but I didn't receive any gift gifts . I don can 't tell say that I didn't felt sad about It this . When I was a child , my parents didn't have money for gifts presents , so it's a common situation in my life.
However, I
tryed nevertheless tried to have a agradable an enjoyable day. I did baked a lemon cake of lemon and some breads bread . It was delicious. Everybody liked it and I felt happy. In the afternoon, I went to the hairdresser thinking that would be a nice idea , but in the next by this morning my hair looks looked terrible. I felt sad was upset about it and never this - I'll never go back there again.
In conclusion, there are good birthdays and bad birthdays. We must
try to enjoy all the moments of our lifes lives and to try strive to do the best for our days ourselves . I hope that my next birthday will be a wonderful one .
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