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The Power Of Tecnology
Tecnology is essential for our lives. It´s presents everywhere and changes our lives everyday. Children seems to learn how to use tecnology more fast and easy than adults. I think it´s frightening because, mostly, they don´t realize how dangerous it can be.
These days the most of the people depends of tecnology for to work and to study. There are many occupations that would not exist if we don´t have advanced tecnology. Also, I can say that the work is most fast and easy with the use of computers and the internet.
However, it´s essential to understand that tecnology can be dangerous if you don´t be careful about it. For example, hackers can to access your bank account if you don´t protect your password in smartphones and computers. The television always show cases where people lost all their savings.
Parents must to talk with children to alert about the danger of to talk with strangers at the internet. I know that is difficult to control what children do at smartphones, but I believe that parents must to keep a eye on the child as frequent as possible.
In summary, tecnology is useful to everybody but it´s must be used with responsability. There are many ways to protect your family and your life. Be carefully and take advantage of all the possibilities that tecnology can provide.
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