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I always dreamed to go to the university. I believed that was the best way to get a better job in the future. Some years after, I found that it wouldn't be a easy way. To be honest, it's a very hard way but it can to prepare you for a promising future.
It's a good idea to begin your study as soon as possible. If you are single, the things will be easier for you. I can't say that it's impossible for marriage people go to the university but I believe that will be more difficult. Marriage people need to manage their time to do all their homework, to study for the exams and to care about the family.
However, to get a degree doesn't guarantee a brilliant future. In fact, it's a important begin but you need to develop your skills to get a good job. After finish the university you need to practice your knowledge and invest time at network.
To conclude, go to the university is a long way to have a good job. Some people get tired and drop out of university. I believe that it's an essential way to help you to realize your dreams and improve your career.

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consuelo.ayebah
University Academic
I always dreamed to go of going to the university. I believed that was the best way to get a better job in the future. Some years after later , I found out that it wouldn't be a an easy way. To be honest, it's a very hard way but it can to prepare you for a promising future.
It's a good idea to begin your study as soon as possible. If you are single,
the things will be easier for you. I can't say that it's impossible for marriage people to go to the university but I believe that will be more difficult. Marriage people need to manage their time to do all their homework, to study for the exams and to take care about of the family.
However,
to get getting a degree doesn't guarantee a brilliant future. In fact, it's a important to begin but you need to develop your skills to get a good job. After finish finishing the university , you need to practice your acquired knowledge and invest time at network in networking .
To conclude,
go going to the university is a long way to have a good job. Some people get tired and drop out of university . I believe that it's an essential way to help you to realize your dreams and improve your career.
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I think the only other change I would make is replacing “marriage people” with “married people”.
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Thank you!
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