Write & CorrectSpanish
my first post :)
Hola! Me llamo 'cloudie' y yo aprendo español. Tengo diecenueve años. Tengo dos gatos, pero yo quiero mas mascotas! Escribo esta mensaje en mi celular. Yo vivo en una ciudad pequeña, en una casa con mi familia-mi padre, madre, y hermano. Hoy es domingo, y la fine de semana es divertida, pero lunes no me gusta. Yo estoy ocupada porque necesito escribir mucho para mis clases, pero no quiero escribir, es aburrido! Ahora es noche, y yo estoy muy cansada, quiero mi cama.. Buenas noches mis amigos! Escribir es divertida, quiero hacer una mensaje otra vez en la manaña.
(This is my first post on this forum, and I only know a few Spanish words, so I can only write very simple sentences. But I thought it would be fun to try writing something anyways. Sorry for the mistakes, I know I made a lot of them.)
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my first post :)
(This is my first post on this forum, and I only know a few Spanish words, so I can only write very simple sentences. But I thought it would be fun to try writing something anyways. Sorry for the mistakes, I know I made a lot of them.)
(The text was pretty good. Most of your mistakes were verb conjugations and word's gender, so it wasn't difficult to understand what you were trying to say. I added another words with slashes because they just sounded better to me, but I don't think the words you chose were wrong either. Perhaps this correction arrives a bit late, but very well done. I'm sure you've improved a lot since you wrote this message until now.)
