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Fast Food
Fast food becoming more and more popular is harmful to the environment. This is because fast food restaurants almost exclusively provide disposable tableware and food packaging, which contributes to the vast quantities of garbage every day, which often is not biodegradable either. For instance, KFC and McDonald’s drinks are served in paper cups instead of glass bottles and offer plastic forks and spoons rather than reusable cutlery. Therefore, the increase in fast food consumption and its growing output of waste will contribute to severe levels of soil, water, and air pollution when this trash is landfilled or combusted.
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It looks great! There are some parts that are worded a little unnaturally, but, to my knowledge, there are no grammatical mistakes, and everything is comprehensible.
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Fast Food
Fast food
,
which is
becoming more and more popular
,
is harmful to the environment. This is because fast food restaurants almost exclusively provide disposable tableware and food packaging, which contributes to the vast quantities of garbage every day,
which
and
is
often
is
not biodegradable
either
. For instance, KFC and
McDonald’s
McDonalds'
drinks are served in paper cups instead of glass bottles
,
and
offer
plastic forks and spoons
are offered
rather than reusable cutlery. Therefore, the increase in fast food consumption and its growing output of waste will contribute to severe levels of soil, water, and air pollution when this trash is
landfilled
committed
to landfill
or
combusted
combustion processes
.
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Thanks a lot.
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