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Stuck into the past.

Every one in this life struggle, Trying their best to do well even thought it's painful sometimes but when you look deeply into what waiting for you for sure you will work even harder to feel that you make progress that what happened before is only to learn from it why? because we learn from our mistakes, we try to find our bath our purpose in this life like we want to discover every inch in this plant in this brain how we think how we deal with daily routine how we think how we look for other and what we expected from others it's all connected to the past the way we treat other now in the present is only how we feel that we treated before if you don't work to improve yourself and make a change no one will care if you success or no in this life so work for you not for other and what their opinion is really no one care only the dump or the person without mind we can't say anything about it .
so to be honest I feel also stuck cuz i didn't get my baccalaureat it was bad thing for me at first but I'm glad that I know there is plenty ways to educate myself to grow and to feel responsible about my life ...

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Samuel.Shearer
Stuck into in the past .
Every one Everyone in this life struggle struggles , Trying trying their best to do well even thought though it's painful sometimes but . However, when you look deeply into what is waiting for you for sure , you will surely work even harder to feel that you make have made progress ; that what happened before is only to learn from it why . Why ? because Because we learn from our mistakes, we try to find our bath our purpose in this life like we . We want to discover every inch in of this plant in , of this brain , how we think , how we deal with the daily routine , how we think , how we look for other to others, and what we expected expect from others it . It 's all connected to the past and the way we treat each other now in the present is only how we feel that we treated before if . If you don't work to improve yourself and make a change , no one will care if you success succeed or no in this life so not. So work for ! For you , not for other and what others. Whatever their opinion is really , no one care only the dump or the person without mind we can't say anything about it really cares .
 so to To be honest , I feel also stuck cuz i because I didn't get my baccalaureat it baccalaureate. It was a bad thing for me at first , but I'm glad that I know that there is are plenty of ways to educate myself , to grow and to feel responsible about my life ... .
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Jerry.Todd
Stuck into in the past.
Every one Everyone in this life struggle struggles , Trying trying their best to do well even thought though it's painful sometimes but . But when you look deeply into what is waiting for you for sure , you will certainly work even harder to feel that you make are making progress , and that what happened before is only to learn from it why . Why ? because Because we learn from our mistakes , we . We try to find our bath our purpose in this life , like we want to discover every inch in this plant planet, in this brain , how we think , how we deal with daily routine , how we think , how we look for each other , and what we are expected from others it . It 's all connected to the past the . The way we treat each other now in the present is only how we feel that we were treated before if . If you don't work to improve yourself and make a change , no one will care if you success succeed or no not in this life so . So work for you yourself, not for other others and what their opinion is really opinions. Really no one care cares, only the dump dumb or the mindless person without mind we . We can't say anything about it .
so So to be honest I also feel also stuck cuz i didn't get my baccalaureat it baccalaureate. It was a bad thing for me at first , but I'm glad that I know there is are plenty of ways to educate myself , to grow , and to feel responsible about my life ...
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Julius.Akin
Stuck into in the past.
Every one Everyone in this life struggle struggles , Trying trying their best to do well , even thought though it 's is painful sometimes , but when you look deeply into what waiting for awaits you for sure , you will work even harder for sure, to feel have the feeling that you make are making progress , and that what has happened before is was only something to learn from it why? because . Because we learn from our mistakes, we try to find our bath path, our purpose in this life like , we want to discover every inch in of this plant planet, and in this brain , how we think , how we deal with daily routine routines, how we think how we look look out for other others, and what we expected from others it's . It is all connected to the past , the way we treat other others now in the present is only how we feel that we were treated before if . If you don't work to improve yourself and make a change , no one will care if you success succeed or no not in this life so . So, work for you yourself and not for other others and what their opinion is really . Really, no one care cares, but only the dump dumpster, or the person one without a mind we can't will not say anything about it . so So, to be honest , I also feel also stuck cuz i because I didn't get my baccalaureat (bachelors), it was a bad thing for me at first , but I'm glad that I know that there is are plenty ways to educate myself , and to grow and to feel responsible about my life ... .
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