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My garden

I'd like to describe my garden it means a lot to me because I remember the last essay I wrote was a long time ago so a decided to be simple and easy essay at this time .

My garden has a lot of things to describe such as: pine tree, orchids, sunflowers, daisies, roses, tulips, violets and poppies, beside that it has grass many types of vases and is very commom to see some kinds of birds visiting my garden such as: hummibirdies, owls , woodpechers, pigeons, and sparrows. To be honest I do not understand so much about how to create a good garden and take care of it . At my home my mather takes care of it and sometimes she needs me to help her to keep it clean and beautiful.

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My garden
I'd like to describe my garden as it means a lot to me because . I remember the last essay I wrote was a long time ago so a I decided to be write a simple and easy essay at this time .

My garden has
a lot of many things to describe such as : pine tree, orchids, sunflowers, daisies, roses, tulips, violets and poppies , beside that it has . There is also grass many types of vases and . It is also very commom to see some kinds different types of birds visiting my garden such as : hummibirdies hummingbirds , owls , woodpechers woodpeckers , pigeons, and sparrows. To be honest I do not understand so much about how to create a good garden and take care of it . At my home my mather mother takes care of it , and sometimes she needs me to help her to keep it clean and beautiful.
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