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My favourite Personality

There are many people all around the earth who are very famous and heroes. But my favorite person is my dad. My dad is my hero and an awesome dad.

He is kind, polite & helpful to people. He is a pastor by profession & is great in teaching to his family & congregation. He is always warm up to help & support the poor and helpless. He is a God-fearing person & always advises us to remember the Allah gifts & Allah love for the world. I am so glad to have a dad like him & I pray that He may live long. He is a backbone & a strong support for his family.

He is a simple man with kind prevails. He refuses nobody if someone comes to the door asking for help. He has a friendly & soft-hearted. I haven’t seen a dad like him. Everybody likes him when he goes to his people & congregation. His staff is likewise delighted with his kind nature & God-fearing work.

There are so many guys I have seen who are living a perfect life because of my dad, who sent them to the school, universities, and Quran institutes for learning & making their destiny because many of them could not study & develop into a better person. I pray for his life & health. He is not so white, not so handsome, maybe not so great appearance but he is my hero, my number one & my ideal man. The finest in the universe & nobody is like him I ever saw.

He is my friend & always ready to promote, appreciate me for achievement and always warm up to help me wherever I need a friend or an encouragement of my dad. I proud of my dad & will him good health & age.

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My favourite Personality
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He is kind, polite
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Always a pleasure. :) It is a good tribute to your dad.
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