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The Night Skies
When I look up to the skies at night, my soul rejoices in awe about the magnificence of this Universe and it makes me think about our world and how it is is a speck of sand compared to this huge, and unknown space.
Oh night sky you are so beautiful full of stars shining their light on us. My mind wonders and there are not answers about how this came to be.
For know, I am just going to be still and I will keep appreciating your beauty because just a peek of you fills me with happiness.
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Ari! better not to look up the sky.....hehehe
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The Night Skies
When I
look
watch
up to the skies at night, my soul
rejoices
exults
in
awe
wonder
about the magnificence of this Universe and it
makes
gives
me
to
think about our world and how it is
is
a
speck
spot
of sand compared to this
huge
tremendous
, and
unknown
strange
space.
Oh , night sky you are sobeautiful
gorgeously
full of stars
shining
sparking
their light on us. My mind
wonders
questions
and there are
not
no
answers
about
regarding
how this came to be.
Forknow
now
, I am just
going
succumbing
to be still and I will
keep
continue
appreciating your
beauty
vision
because just a peek of you fills me with
happiness
pleasure
.
Oh , night sky you are so
For
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The Night Skies
When I look up to the skies at night, my soul rejoices in awe about the magnificence of this Universe and it makes me think about our world and how it is
is
a speck of sand compared to this huge, and unknown space.
Oh , night sky , you are so beautiful , full of stars shining their light on us. My mind wonders and there arenot
no
answers about how this came to be.
Forknow
now
, I
am
just going to
will
be still and I will keep appreciating your beauty because just a peek
of
at
you fills me with happiness.
Oh , night sky , you are so beautiful , full of stars shining their light on us. My mind wonders and there are
For
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That's a pretty piece. The earnest adoration really wants to be heard. More please! :)
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