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During the quarantine time quiets down, and one starts paying attention to more delicate things. I now realize that I've been following some kind of rythm: each week I turn to a specific activity. It's already been studying the tarot, reading about women's period in its connection to the moon cycles, and testing the results of essential oils' use.
Last week I was dedicated to seeing pictures. The old printed ones in their photo books. And my mind got lost in recalling. It's a terrific exercise! I could trace my development so clearly, my clothing and environments giving me clues about the way I thought and felt.
I obviously remembered many stories as well. And they made me laugh a lot. There was also some crying. And some longing. Suddenly life becomes huge, and I feel very rich.
Yesterday I was talking to a friend about these things and she gave me my following craze: watching again the movies that have molded my taste and emotions.

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Soup
Hey Valeria, a few mistakes, a few things that don't sound good, otherwise it's a lovely essay.
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Aussie.B
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During As the quarantine time quiets down, and one starts paying attention to more delicate things. I now realize that I've been following some kind of rythm rhythm : each week I turn to a specific activity. It I ' s ve already been studying the tarot, reading about women's period periods in its connection to the moon cycles, and testing the results of using essential oils ' use .
Last week I was dedicated to seeing looking at pictures . The —the old printed ones in their photo books . And —and my mind I got lost in recalling. It's a terrific exercise! I could trace my development so clearly, my clothing and environments giving me clues about the way I thought and felt.
I obviously remembered many stories as well . And , and they made me laugh a lot. There was also some crying . And , and some longing. Suddenly life becomes huge, and I feel very rich.
Yesterday I was talking to a friend about these things and she gave me my following next craze: watching again the movies that have molded my taste and emotions.
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Aussie.B
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During As the quarantine time quiets down, and one starts paying attention to more delicate things. I now realize that I've been following some kind of rythm rhythm : each week I turn to a specific activity. It I ' s ve already been studying the tarot, reading about women's period periods in its connection to the moon cycles, and testing the results of using essential oils ' use .
Last week I was dedicated to seeing looking at pictures . The —the old printed ones in their photo books . And —and my mind I got lost in recalling. It's a terrific exercise! I could trace my development so clearly, my clothing and environments giving me clues about the way I thought and felt.
I obviously remembered many stories as well . And , and they made me laugh a lot. There was also some crying . And , and some longing. Suddenly life becomes huge, and I feel very rich.
Yesterday I was talking to a friend about these things and she gave me my following next craze: watching again the movies that have molded my taste and emotions.
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Aussie.B
Sorry, this posted twice.
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paul75009
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During the quarantine time quiets quietens down, and one starts paying attention to more delicate things. I now realize that I've been following some kind of rythm: rhythm - each week I turn to a specific activity. It I ' s ve already been studying the tarot, reading about women's period in and its connection to the moon cycles, and testing the results of using essential oils ' use .
Last week I was dedicated to seeing pictures. The old printed ones in their photo books. And This got my mind got lost in recalling. It's a terrific exercise! I could trace my development so clearly , my . My clothing and my environments were giving me clues about the way I thought and felt.
I obviously remembered many stories as well . And they and these made me laugh a lot. There was also some crying . And - and some longing. Suddenly life becomes huge, and I feel very rich.
Yesterday I was talking to a friend about these things and she gave me my following next craze: watching again the movies that have molded my taste and emotions.
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paul75009
If you want to break up a sentence, I'd avoid using : or ; and use - instead. No one generally uses colons, except maybe in academic writing. Up to you, because it's not wrong.
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During the quarantine , time quiets down, and one starts paying attention to more delicate things. I now realize that I've been following some kind of rythm: each rhythm. Each week I turn to a specific activity . It's already been studying , such as learning the tarot, reading about women's period in and its connection to the moon cycles, cycle and testing the results of essential oils' use used . Last week , I was dedicated devoted my time to seeing viewing old pictures . The , the old printed ones in their photo books. And my mind got lost in recalling I recalled the memories from the past . It's a terrific exercise! I could trace my development progress so clearly, my clothing clothes and environments , giving me clues about the way I thought and felt. I obviously remembered many stories as well. And they made me laugh a lot. There was were also some crying . And some and longing. Suddenly life becomes huge, and I feel very rich. Yesterday I was talking to a friend about these things and she gave me my following next craze : watching , to watch again the movies that have molded my taste tastes and emotions.
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Soup
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During the quarantine time quiets slows down, and one starts paying attention to more delicate things. I now realize that I've been following some kind of rythm rhythm : each week I turn to would start a specific activity. It I ' s already been studying ve studied the tarot, reading read about women's period in its periods and their connection to the moon cycles, and testing tested the results of using essential oils ' use .
Last week I was dedicated devoted to seeing looking at pictures. The old printed ones in their photo books. And my mind got lost in recalling reminiscing . It's a terrific exercise! I could trace my development so clearly, my clothing and environments giving me clues about the way ways I thought and felt.
I obviously remembered many stories as well. And they made me laugh a lot. There was also some crying. And some longing. Suddenly life becomes huge, and I feel very rich.
Yesterday I was talking to a friend about these things and she gave me my following next craze: watching again rewatching the movies that have molded moulded my taste and emotions.
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AppleMae.Soriano
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During the quarantine , time quiets down , and one starts paying attention to more delicate things. I now realize have realized that I've been following some kind of rythm: each rhythm. Each week I turn to a specific activity. It I ' s ve already been studying the tarot, reading about women's period in its connection to the moon cycles, and testing the results of essential oils' oil use.

 Last While last week , I was dedicated to seeing pictures. The old printed ones in their photo books. And my mind got lost in recalling. It's a terrific exercise! I could trace my development so clearly, my clothing and environments environment are giving me clues about the way I thought and felt.

I obviously remembered many stories as well. And they made me laugh a lot. There was were also some crying that made me cry . And some longing. Suddenly life becomes huge , and I feel very rich.

Yesterday , I was talking to a friend about these things and she gave me my following craze: watching again the movies that have molded my taste and emotions.
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