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The Witcher 3

Hello, my name is Francisco Honorato and i'm playing this game recently. As my very first time here, so if you like the kind of game that you have to spend a lot of time playing, that's your game!

It has a lot of things to do and go, there's tons of quests to be solved. In fact are so many games to play in the world, but you can buy it for a couple of bucks and save some money to eat a pizza in the weekend.

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I like your thinking about the pizza. Obviously a sensible chap 👍
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The Witcher 3
Hello, my name is Francisco Honorato and i'm playing this game recently. As is my very first time post here , so . I've been playing this game recently and if you like the kind of game that you have to spend a lot of time playing, that it 's your the game for you ! It has a lot of things to do and places to go, plus there 's are tons of quests to be solved. In fact There are so many games to play in the world, but you can buy it this one for a couple of bucks and save some your money to eat for a pizza in at the weekend . !
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First, thanks for the correction. "As my very first time here" means that this essay was my first one in this site.
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Thanks for clarifying - I've altered the correction accordingly ✔
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