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A trip to Florianópolis
I wist to describe a awesome trip I did in 2010. In that time I use to wort at techinic at Papaiz groud in Diadema city. So I and mo friends had an idea to travel to Florianópolis at the end of the year. It was I great trip we went by car and back by car, there we stayed at an apartment we rent for a week it was amazing I never knew great beaches like there.
At day we went a beach and drunk some beer at night we went to the club and flarting with some girls.
I knew the best beachs of brasil such as english beach, reconcavo beach, maré beach and jurere internacional beach. We spent about 500 reais in total, I consider this value very cheap. Ok thank you have a nice day
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A trip to Florianópolis
I
wist
want
to describe
a
an
awesome trip I did in 2010.
In
At
that time I
use
used
to
wort
work
at techinic
[not sure what you mean here -- "
at
Papaiz
groud
a
technical
school", maybe, or "as a technician"?]
in
the Papaiz area of
Diadema city
[again, not quite sure here]
. So
I
my
friends
and
mo
friends
I
had
an
the
idea to travel to Florianópolis at the end of the year. It was
I
a
great trip
we
.
We
went
by
car
there
and back by car,
there
and
we stayed at an apartment we
rent
rented
for a week
it
.
It
was amazing
.
I never knew
such
great beaches
like
as
the ones
there.
At
During
the
day we went
to
a beach and
drunk
drank
some beer
at
.
At
night we went to the club
and
flarting
,
where
we
flirted
with some girls.
Iknew
know
the best
beachs
beaches
of
brasil
Brazil
such as
english
beach
English
Beach
,
reconcavo
beach
Reconcavo
Beach
,
maré
beach
Maré
Beach
and
jurere
internacional
beach
Jurere
International
Beach
. We spent about 500 reais in total
,
.
I consider this
value
to
be
very
cheap
good value
.
Ok
OK,
thank you
,
have a nice day
!
I
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