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What I am and What I suppose to be
I'd like to point it ou by the following manner: right now Iam a self employed and Iam not satisfied with it. If I could switch my carrier probably I would be a doctor.
Let me get across it better. When I was young I did not have opportunity to study a lot . I raised in a poor family and my father divorced from my mother when I had just two months.
Since there my mother raised me and my brother by her own.
So I can not afford a good school , by the way, Iam not good on math .
As a doctor I'd like to be a dentist. From my point of view it has a great carrier . When someone smile from me I feel glad and it is the most important characteristic coming from another person.
I know this profession has a great salary and also I will have condition on take care of my family.
The only thing I'd like to get across is the fact when I was young and went on a doctor I felt so much pain on removing my carie. It was not a good experience but I understood it was fundamental.
If right now I were a dentist I'll be the best dentist from my city . I'll have my own office and my on secretary.
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