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I love to eat thus I love to cook. I think of myself as a self though cook. Then life throws me a curve ball and send me a family member with food allergies, which means cooking with restricted ingredients. What do I do? I have decided to be an even better cook, experiment to find the best substitutions until the recipe is right. Sometimes we go thru life complaining about what happens to us but I have taught myself to try to look at the bright side. In my case, we eat healthier because I cook everything from scratch and if I didn't like to cook like I do, my family member wouldn't be able to eat all the treats a prepare them with all my love to keep them safe.

Please correct me I am pretty sure a I have a lot of errors lol

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Mi favorite things
I love to eat , thus I love to cook. I think of myself as a self -cook though cook . Then life throws me a curve ball and send sends me a family member with food allergies, which that means cooking with restricted ingredients. What do I do? I have decided to be an even better cook, experiment to find the best substitutions until the recipe is right . Sometimes we go thru life complaining in our lives we complain about what happens to us the happenings but I have taught myself to try to look at the bright side stay positive . In my case, we i eat healthier because I cook everything from scratch do self cooking and if I didn't like to cook like I do, cooking,, my family member members wouldn't be able to eat all the treats a i prepare for them with all my love to keep them safe.

Please correct me I am pretty sure a I have a lot of errors lol
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Mi favorite things
I love to eat thus I love to cook. I think of myself as a self though -taught cook. Then life throws me a curve ball and send sends me a family member with food allergies, which means cooking with restricted ingredients. What do I do? I have decided to be an even better cook, experiment to find the best substitutions until the recipe is right. Sometimes we go thru through life complaining about what happens to us but I have taught myself to try to look at the bright side. In my case, we eat healthier because I cook everything from scratch and if I didn't like to cook like I do, my family member wouldn't be able to eat all the treats a I prepare them with all my love to keep them safe.

Please correct me I am pretty sure a I have a lot of errors lol
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Mi favorite things
I love to eat , thus [1] I love to cook. I think of myself as a self though -taught cook. Then life throws me a curve ball and send sends me a family member with food allergies, which means cooking with restricted ingredients. What do I do? I have decided to be an even better cook , and experiment to find the best substitutions until the recipe is right. Sometimes we go thru through life complaining about what happens to us , but I have taught myself to try to look at the bright side. In my case, we eat healthier because I cook everything from scratch , and if I didn't like to cook like I do, my family member members wouldn't be able to eat all the my treats a . I prepare them with all my love to keep them safe.

Please correct me I am pretty sure a I have a lot of errors lol Lovely paragraph and sentence structures! [1] "thus" works here, but "so" is less formal and more common :)
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