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The best travel that I ever had
I usually don't travel for different places because we don't have money for this, but, every year me and my mom are going to Minas Gerais, an estate closer to mine here in Brazil.
In one of those travels we decided that we gonna go in an airplane, cause my mom in her 56 years old hasn't never enter in a airplane before. So, I remember the look on her face when we started to fly, she was so happy and it's was great for me and makes me think that how could a simple thing like an airplane can make me and her so happy and make that travel the best.
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What a lovely story. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for sharing your story, it is really touching especially that we are celebrating Mothers Day just this week. By making your mom happy, you became happy as well, that means a lot about how good you are as her daughter. Continue to make your mom happy and she will always treasure those moments with you. Happy Mothers Day to your mom!
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The best
travel
trip
that I ever had
I usually don't travel
for
to
different places because we don't have money for this, but, every year me and my mom
are
going
go
to Minas Gerais, an
estate
closer
to
mine
here
area
not
far
from
where
I live
in Brazil.
In
On
one of those
travels
trips
we decided that we
gonna
would
go
in
an airplane
by
plane
,
cause
because
my mom
in
her
,
who
is
56 years old
hasn
,
hadn
't
never
enter
ever
travelled
in
a
an
airplane before. So, I remember the look on her face when we started to fly, she was so happy and it
's
was great for me and
makes
made
me think
that
how
could
a simple thing like an airplane can make me and her so happy
and
make
.
That
was
what made
that
travel
trip
the best.
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... and made me think how a simple thing like an airplane could make she and I so happy
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