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Biggest Disappointment
The biggest, worst, disappointment was having a palatal expander in my mouth. When I was told I needed it, I thought it wouldn’t be that bad: but I was so wrong.
When the dentist put in my mouth, I realized it was a lot bigger and bulkier than I thought. Then I found out that it was a step away from impossible to eat with it. Then I found out that it makes me whole mouth hurt and become sore. Then worst of all I found out that I had to where it for four+ months!
When I found out all the bad and tortures things listed above. I wanted to grab to and rip it out of my mouth. Then I realized that it was cemented to my teeth.
So, I had to resign my self to the tortures that it inflicted.
To the person reading this: Pray that you don’t find my dead, blood coming out of my mouth, and my jaw the width of one foot!
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Biggest Disappointment
When the dentist put it in my mouth, I realized it was a lot bigger and bulkier than I thought it would be .
When I found out all the bad and
So, I had to resign
To the person reading this: Pray that you don’t find my dead, blood coming out of my mouth, and my jaw the width of one foot!