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Life Change after the pandemic

After the Pandemic, the world changed so fast and our life is following this flow for the good and negative things. The way that we are communicating with others, working and the time that we spend in our home are being reshaped. As a global community, we need to think in the holistic way to sort out some topics like gender discrimination, environment, health, racism and others. On the other hand, during this time at home, regarding the pandemic, have emerged new ideas in how can we can coordinate some obstacles using technology. For instance, remotely jobs, remotely courses, effective meeting using zoom and Microsoft teams are help our lives in other to have more accessibility. With this improvements some people was included, people with physical disabilities, people who like far from big cities now have the opportunity to participated and improve their lives. New personal behavior and abilities are being demanded for everyone, emotional intelligence, how to lead with frustration it´s hard but we need to learn how to deal with it.

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Great job! You have a great range of vocabulary! I wasn’t sure exactly what you meant in some parts of your essay because it feels a bit wordy in places. But overall, fantastic essay!
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Life Change after the pandemic
After the Pandemic pandemic , the world changed so fast and our life is . Our lives are following this flow for the of good and negative things. The way that we are communicating with others, working , and the time that we spend in our home are being reshaped. As a global community, we need to think in the holistic way to sort out some topics like gender discrimination, environment, health, racism and others. On the other hand, during this time at home, regarding the pandemic, have emerged new ideas in how can we can coordinate some obstacles using technology. For instance, remotely remote jobs, remotely remote courses, and effective meeting meetings using zoom and Microsoft teams are help making our lives in other to have more accessibility easier . With this these improvements some people was included , people with physical disabilities, and people who like far from big cities now have the opportunity to participated participate and improve their lives. New personal behavior and abilities are being demanded for everyone, like emotional intelligence , how . How to lead with frustration when frustrated; it´s hard but we need to learn how to deal with do it.
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Thanks Grace for you generosity in correct my essay!!!
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