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Gifts for young people

Everybody likes to win gifts but several times, to buy a gift for a young people can be very difficult. For this reason, some people prefer to give money because it´s more easy. However, is it the best way for the situation?
Children likes play a lot. There are a big diversity of toys for each age. Relatives are used to tale their children to store. This can be a big headache.
On the other hand, who choose to give money for children, can to make a terrible mistake. In this way, young people have the power of to buy what to desire. We know that there are things goods and bads at the shops.
In conclusion, I believe which relatives must understand the necessity of their son and to do the best choose. Sometimes the correct choose can be the money and another the gift.

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Don't worry about making mistakes! My grandma used to say: "The person who never made a mistake never made anything!" Making mistakes is how we learn languages :)
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Linda.Quayle
Gifts for young people
Everybody likes to win receive gifts but several times often , to buy buying a gift for a young people person can be very difficult. For this reason, some people prefer to give money because it´s more easy easier . However, is it that the best way for the situation to go ?
Children
likes like to play a lot. There are is a big diversity of toys for each age. Relatives are used to tale taking their children to the store. This can be a big headache.
On the other hand,
who choose choosing to give money for to children , can to make mean making a terrible mistake. In this way, young people have the power of to buy what to they desire. We But we know that there are things goods both good and bads bad things at the shops.
In conclusion, I believe
which relatives must understand what the necessity of their son child needs, and to do make the best choose choice . Sometimes the correct choose choice can be the money , and another the other times a gift.
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Thank vou very much! I did a lot of mistakes.
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