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Everybody knows that essencial to take care about the health. These days there are a big variable options of food at the supermarket. We need to choose right foods to improve our health. I know that sometimes, it was not easy to do but it´s very important.
I can say that my health is great. Last week I visited my doctor to check the results of my examination. It was very good and I felt grateful about it. Today I remembered that the last sandwich I ate was in January. What a long time ago!
Frequently I see at my work people eating sandwich and drinking soft drink. These people will have, as a result, some health problems in the future. I try to avoid that type of drink and alimentation because I know that it´s not good for my health.
To conclude, the way to have a healthy life is take good food habits since young. There are always a manner to improve your health. So, think a little bit before you to place an order at a snack bar.
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Health
I can say that my health is great. Last week I visited my doctor to check the results of my examination.
Frequently I see people at my work
To conclude, the way to have a healthy life is
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Health
I can say that my health is great. Last week I visited my doctor to check the results of my examination. It was very good and I felt grateful about it. Today I remembered that the last sandwich I ate was in January. What a long time ago!
Frequently I see at my
To conclude, the way to have a healthy life is