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How To Have A Good Life

In this essay I will explain how to have a good life in this days. Everybody desires to be happy but there are a lot of obstacles in the way. So, we have to survive and modify all the bad circumstances than can to arise.
Some people thinks that will be happy if they get rich. I can say that is a big mistake. Money is important, however, there are things that money can´t buy. For instance, there are diseases that the most expensive treatment can´t be able to cure.
Be grateful about the things that you have is a key for a happy life. Don´t thing only about material things but mainly about good feelings, family and friendship. To make true friends can to improve your life.
In other words, to be happy isn´t easy. You need to do your best every day, also to correct all your mistakes, to be grateful about the things and to be agradable with the other people. As a result, you will have the best life that you´ve ever had.

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Joel.Galang
How To Have A Good Life
In this essay I will explain how to have a good life in this these days. Everybody desires to be happy but there are a lot of obstacles in the way. So, we have to survive and modify all the bad circumstances than can to arise.
Some people
thinks think that they will be happy if they get rich. I can say that is a big mistake. Money is important , however . However , there are things that money can´t buy. For instance, there are diseases that the most expensive treatment can´t be able to cure.
Be Being grateful about the things that you have is a key for a happy life. Don´t thing think only about material things but mainly about good feelings, family and friendship. To make Making true friends can to improve your life.
In other words, to be happy isn´t easy. You need to do your best every day,
also to correct all your mistakes, to be grateful about the things and to be agradable agreeable with the other people. As a result, you will have the best life that you´ve ever had.
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