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My new homeland
Hello, i'm living in Gramado, Rio Grande do Sul in Brazil. This place is amazing for people who desires to breath a good air and it's a calm place to walk around. There a lot of trees and good places to take a photos. Tourists always come here to visit.
Months ago, i was living at Rio de Janeiro, a world known as "city of samba and beautiful women". I met a lot of good friends there, but in my opinion the city isn't good at all.
It's dangerous, a lot of people wants to mug you at the downtown and the transit is terrible!
I was happy, now i'm much happier than ever.
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My
new
homeland
New
Hometown
Hello,
i
I
'm
currently
living in Gramado, Rio Grande do Sul in Brazil. This place is amazing for people who
desires
desire
to
breath
a
breathe
good air and
it's
for
a calm place to walk around. There
are
a lot of trees and good places to take
a
photos. Tourists always come here to visit.
Months ago,i
I
was living
at
in
Rio de Janeiro,
a
world
known
known
worldwide
as "
the
city of samba and beautiful women". I met a lot of good friends there, but in my opinion the city isn't good at all.
It's dangerous,
.
Downtown
a lot of people
wants
want
to mug you
at the downtown
and the transit
system
is terrible!
I was happy then , but nowi
I
'm
much
happier than ever.
Months ago,
It's dangerous
I was happy then , but now
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"Tourists always come here to visit " sentence is grammatically fine but a better way of saying that is "The city is very popular with tourists " 👍
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Thanks again, I will pay more attention when have to write (I instead of i)
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My new homeland
Hello, i'm living in Gramado, Rio Grande do Sul in Brazil. This place is amazing for people who
desires
desire
to
breath
a
good
breathe
fresh
air
and it
.
It
's a calm place to walk around. There a lot of trees and good places to take a photos. Tourists always come here to visit
(though this phrase is technically correct, I would rephrase it as "It is a popular with tourists" or "it is a popular tourist area")
. Months ago,
i
I
was living
at
in
Rio de Janeiro, a world known as "
the
city of samba and beautiful women". I met a lot of good friends there, but in my opinion the city isn't good at all. It's dangerous, a lot of people
wants
want
to mug you
at
in
the downtown
area
and the
transit
is
public
transport
terrible! I was happy,
but
now
i
I
'm much happier than ever.
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Thanks! "public transport" it would be transit system, with roads, traffic lights, the drivers...
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The entire system would be the transport infrastructure
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