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Characteristics inherited from my parents.

There are three qualities that I inherited from my parents , here I would like to mention three: I am a very kind person, besides, I am very intelligent and very skillful person.
First I wanna point it out my kindness in many situations such as: at my work, at my house at the church and at school , in many ways I am ready to help people on conquer their goals.
The next point is the fact that I am a smart person. I have two incomplete universities, and two mechanical courses that I have done. Besides that, I can speak English and Portuguese and am very proud of it.
To finalize I would like to mention the last point of view, here I go: am a very skillful person on playing games as: football and volleyball on the same hand I can drive so well a motorcycle and a car and I am not a fearful person in these cases. All of this characteristics were inherited in parts from my parents and am very glad for that.

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Linda.Quayle
Characteristics inherited from my parents.
There are three qualities that I inherited from my parents , and here I would like to mention three them : I am a very kind person , besides, ; I am also a very intelligent person; and very skillful person I have many skills .
First I
wanna want to point it out my kindness in many situations , such as: at my work, at in my house home, at the church , and at school , in . In many ways I am ready to help people on conquer achieve their goals.
The next point is
the fact that I am a smart person. I have two incomplete universities [what did you mean here -- completed , or not yet completed?] university courses, and two mechanical courses that I have done to my credit . Besides that, I can speak English and Portuguese and am very proud of it that .
To
finalize finish, I would like to mention the last point of view, here quality. I go: am a very skillful person on skilled at playing games such as : football and volleyball on the same hand I can drive so well . Similarly, I am very good at riding a motorcycle and driving a car and . I am not a fearful person in when I'm doing these cases things . All of this these characteristics were inherited in parts part from my parents and I am very glad grateful for that.

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Many thanks I appreciate your correction. (what did you mean here -- completed , or not yet completed?) When you asked me I want to mean I have two university courses not completed yet. :)
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OK, so if you are intending to complete the courses at some point in the future, you might say: "I started two university courses, but have not yet completed them." If you're not planning to complete the courses, then you might say: "I started two university courses, but did not complete them."
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