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Adventure on roof house

I like of collect very adventure of the my life, but a more fantastic adventure was when I saw stars on roof of the my place. It was great , amazing and very well.
I make this when I'm anxious with school, extracurriculares and other things. The star, galaxies and universe calm me.

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You are an astrophile like me! :)
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Yes, I am. I LOVE the universe.
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Linda.Quayle
Adventure on the roof of my house
I like of collect very adventure of the to have adventures in my life, but a more really fantastic adventure was when I saw went to look at the stars on from the roof of the my place. It was great , amazing , and very well really good .
I
make do this when I'm anxious with about school, extracurriculares extracurricular activities, and other things. The star stars , the galaxies and the universe calm me.
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thanks
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Adventure on roof house
I like of to collect very every adventure of the my life , but a . A more fantastic adventure was when I saw stars on the roof of the my place. It was great , amazing and very well awesome .

I
make do this when I'm anxious with school, extracurriculares extracurriculars and other things. The star stars , galaxies and the universe calm makes me calm .
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freney
Adventure on the roof of my house
I like of collect very adventure of the adventures in my life, but a more one fantastic adventure was when I saw stars on roof of the my place. It was great , amazing and very well good .
I
make do this when I'm anxious with school, extracurriculares extra-curricular activities and other things. The star, galaxies and universe calm me.
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A couple of specifics on the changes: well --> good: well is an adverb, and describes, *how* you do something (I ride a bike well, I swim well) but good is an adjective that describes a quality of something (a friend is good, an experience was good, a good dog). Like everything in English this usually applies, but there are exceptions. But that's why the change here. make --> do: In English you *do* things rather than *make* them. Making in English is quite specifically crafting something or creating it - you make a cake.
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Hi freney, you might want to select the little page icon next to the title of your correction; that will show the corrected version. There is an error.
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