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Picnic in the part with my family

My mother and my father brought food in supermarket, because We will go make picnic in ther park. First, we organized the buy. Second, we organized a little picnic kit and now we put the picnic blanket in the soil and we put the lunch on the picnic blanket.
We eat all food and now I and my sister are swinging in the park's lake.

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Linda.Quayle
Picnic in the part park with my family
My mother and my father brought bought food in the supermarket, because We will we wanted to go make for a picnic in ther the park. First, we organized the buy shopping . Second, we organized a little picnic kit , and now next we put the picnic blanket in on the soil ground and we put the lunch on the picnic blanket.
We
eat have eaten all the food and now I and my sister are swinging swimming in the park 's lake.
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Picnic in the part park with my family
My mother and my father brought food in at supermarket, because We will go make we were going to have a picnic in ther the park.
First, we organized
the buy and brought food supplies .
Second Secondly , we organized a little picnic kit and now we put the picnic blanket in on the soil and . Thirdly, we put the lunch on the picnic blanket . We eat and we ate all the food and now I . Now my sister and my sister I are swinging swimming in the park's lake.
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Picnic in the part park with my family
My mother and my father brought bought food in a supermarket , because We will go make we wanted to have a picnic in ther the park. First, we organized the decided what to buy . Second, which we organized made into a little picnic kit and now . Then we put the picnic laid a blanket in on the soil ground and we put the lunch on the picnic blanket. We eat all food ate everything and now I my sister and my sister I are swinging swimming in the park's lake.
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