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Picnic in the part with my family
My mother and my father brought food in supermarket, because We will go make picnic in ther park. First, we organized the buy. Second, we organized a little picnic kit and now we put the picnic blanket in the soil and we put the lunch on the picnic blanket.
We eat all food and now I and my sister are swinging in the park's lake.
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Picnic in the
part
park
with my family
My mother and my father
brought
bought
food in
the
supermarket, because
We
will
we
wanted
to
go
make
for
a
picnic in
ther
the
park. First, we organized the
buy
shopping
. Second, we organized a little picnic kit
,
and
now
next
we put the picnic blanket
in
on
the
soil
ground
and
we put
the lunch on the picnic blanket.
Weeat
have
eaten
all
the
food and now I and my sister are
swinging
swimming
in the park
's
lake.
We
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Picnic in the
part
park
with my family
My mother and my father brought food
in
at
supermarket, because
We
will
go
make
we
were
going
to
have a
picnic in
ther
the
park.
First, we organizedthe
buy
and
brought food supplies
.
Second
Secondly
, we organized a little picnic kit and
now we
put the picnic blanket
in
on
the soil
and
.
Thirdly,
we put the lunch on the picnic blanket
.
We
eat
and
we
ate
all
the
food
and
now
I
.
Now
my
sister
and
my
sister
I
are
swinging
swimming
in the park's lake.
First, we organized
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Picnic in the
part
park
with my family
My mother and
my
father
brought
bought
food in
a
supermarket
,
because
We
will
go
make
we
wanted
to
have
a
picnic in
ther
the
park. First, we
organized
the
decided
what
to
buy
.
Second,
which
we
organized
made
into
a little picnic kit
and
now
.
Then
we
put
the
picnic
laid
a
blanket
in
on
the
soil
ground
and
we
put the lunch on the
picnic
blanket. We
eat
all
food
ate
everything
and now
I
my
sister
and
my
sister
I
are
swinging
swimming
in the park's lake.
Posted