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Guilherme.CamaraMarques

Why I want to learn English?

This is my first essay that I am writing, I met the OPlingo now, so I decided to try write something. Good, the first idea that I had to write about it was like a introduction about me, but I think it's better to tell a bit the motives that I want to speak English.
I have a lot of motives to want understand English. I have a dream to visit another conuntries, if possible to live another country a day, to know English nowadays it's crucial in resumes, and many other motives. I already tried to learn English in some schools, I knew somethings, but I thought the things that I learned there it were limited to a theoretical reality. In the last years I had stopped to study English and I am coming back to pratice my English in this year. So I think it's better to stop for here, I wrote a lot for a person who don't know English very much YET, but I will try to improve.
Please, I'm sorry for my likely some mistakes in this language, and I accept criticisms if they are help me to improve.

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Don't be disheartened by the "sea of green" in the corrections, it is not as bad as it can first appear. Your English is perfectly understandable in terms of expressing yourself, which is the main thing that language is for! The rest just comes with practice and use. Please, no need to apologise for mistakes - If we thought we made no mistakes we would (a) not need to be on this site. And (b) just obviously plain delusional.🤪 We help by correcting (not criticising) the efforts of other learners. I like the way you've capitalised "yet" - it shows a good positive attitude, I'm sure you'll do well.
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Jade.Xuereb
Hey Guilherme I just wanted to say if you want another word for motive you can use 'reason' instead of repeating yourself... this demonstrates a higher level of understanding and I second what draenog.jon says don't be disheartened your English is great :)
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Raymond.S.
Good job on reviving your English. Enjoy the journey
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deleted.89604
Why Do I want Want to learn Learn English? / or / Why I Want to Learn English.
This is my the first essay that I am writing , I met since finding the OPlingo now, so OPLingo site. I 've decided to try to write something good . Good, the The first idea that I had was to just write about it was like a an introduction about me myself , but I think it's [probably] better to tell a bit the explain my motives that I want for wanting to speak English.
I have a lot of motives motivation to want understand English. I have a dream to visit another conuntries about visiting other countries , and, if possible , to live in another country a one day . Nowadays , to know understanding English nowadays it's is crucial in resumes for résumés , and many other motives reasons . I have already tried to learn English in some schools, classes. I knew somethings learnt some things , but I thought the things that what I learned learnt there it were was limited to a and more theoretical than reality. In For the last few years I had 'd stopped to study studying English and but this year I am coming back have decided to pratice resume practising my English in this year [again] . So , I think it's better to stop for here now , I wrote 've written a lot for a person who don doesn 't YET know English very much YET English , but I will try to improve.
Please, I'm sorry for some of my likely some mistakes in this language, and I accept criticisms if they are to help me to improve.
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Guilherme.CamaraMarques
Hey, thank you very much for your corrections. I will see all changes and study to understand how I can correct this mistakes. However, I am very grateful with your help and I am very happy with your words saying that my English is perfectly understandable, and I will continue studying to improve more and more!!!
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deleted.89604
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