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Elderly Drivers
According to some people, elderly drivers should be required to reapply for their driving licenses because with age comes diminished vision, hearing, and reaction time. How do you feel about this issue? Explain what you think should be done and why.
According to Brazilian law, every driver should update their status every five years. Hence, they must take an eyesight exam and an evaluation with a doctor to assess their physical condition. A healthy young person would not find any difficult to get through this process. Nevertheless, elderlies may find some barriers to get their license renewed. In most cases, cognitive deficits are responsible for the lack of attention on the traffic owing to their age. I believe denying their access to a document that is their right is not the solution, but we can implement specific rules for their traffic. And request an update in a shorter period. In a nutshell, we can not take draconian measures on this case, but it is everyone's responsibility to take care of life.
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Elderly Drivers
According to Brazilian law, every driver
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