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What is level of cruelty that human beings can reach?

What is the level of cruelty that human beings can reach? A picture about concentration camps shows that worst atrocities that happened in the history and that is still recent, as it is only 75 years old.

In 1939, Adolf Hitler wanted to eliminate all those who are not inclused in his ideia of making arians the population in germany.

When started 2nd war World, in september, jews, gypsies, homesexuals, jehovah's witness, physically and mentally disabled and policial oppontens, were takes to concetration camps that nazis said it was a bettler place to live. When they arrived, old and small chlidren were killed, for beings useless. Later they were forced to inhuman conditions and works, were many did not resist.

200 milions died, died for the reasons, and to this day there are survivors who report how horrible the time was lived in concetration camps.

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An alternative sentence is shown in parentheses. One of your sentences - "Later they were forced..." sounds as though the old and small children who were killed from your previous sentence were then forced to work. The "they" doesn't make clear who you are writing about.
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What is level of cruelty that can human beings can reach?
What is the level of cruelty that human beings can reach? A picture about concentration camps shows that the worst atrocities that happened in the history , and that is still recent , as it is only 75 years old.

In 1939, Adolf Hitler wanted to eliminate all those who are not
inclused included in his ideia idea of making arians Arians the population in germany Germany . When started 2nd war World, (In 1939, Adolf Hitler wanted to eliminate all those who are not part of his ideal Arian population in september Germany.)

When World War II started
, jews Jews , gypsies Gypsies , homesexuals homosexuals , jehovah Jehovah 's witness Witness , physically and mentally disabled , and policial oppontens, political opponents were takes taken to concetration concentration camps that nazis Nazis said it was a bettler place were better places to live. When they arrived, old the elderly and small chlidren children were killed, for beings considered to be useless. Later they Able-bodied and younger people were forced to live and work in inhuman conditions and works, were many did not unable to resist.

200
milions million died, died for the these reasons, and to this day there are survivors who report how horrible the time was lived in concetration concentration camps.
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