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A bad way to have fun
These days there are a increase of adult people playing games. They like playing alone or in pairs. We know there are a lot of violent games. In this essay, I´ll explain a little more about the danger that this tipe of entertainment can cause.
Adult people have a lot of activities all day. Some people look for a easy fun playing violent games at the internet. If doesn´t exist a control, people can wast a lot of time on these games and leave important things behind.
Another worrisome factor is there are people using the idea of violent games to practice crimes. The police recorded a lot of cases that mimic scenes these type of games. Danger people use the idea of game to kill inocence people. I think it´s very sad because this type of crime could be avoid if there were restrictions about it.
To conclude, the police must to control the access to violent games with the objective to reduce crimes and agressive actions. Also, people must be aware and to look safe ways to have fun.