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My birthday
Yesterday was my birthday. I did thirty five years old. This was a special day for me but I didn't receive any gift. I don't tell that I didn't felt sad about It. When I was a child my parents didn't have money for gifts, so it's a common situation in my life.
However, I tryed have a agradable day. I did a cake of lemon and some breads. It was delicious. Everybody liked it and I felt happy. In the afternoon, I went to hairdresser thinking that would be a nice idea , but in the next morning my hair looks terrible. I felt sad about it and never I'll go back there again.
In conclusion, there are good birthdays and bad birthdays. We must to enjoy all the moments of our lifes and to try to do the best for our days. I hope that my next birthday be wonderful.
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In conclusion, there are good birthdays and bad birthdays. We must try to enjoy all