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vacation
Vacations. We have a tradition in my family. Every summer we get our bags , the car and go to the forest make camp . I don't like the mosquitoes , but the others things are great.
today we are fishing . I don't want to say, but i am very good at fishing. I got four fish already and it is only morning now . To want
see how much I will get in the end of the day!
While I was fishing , my dad made a fire in he camp. Everyone is eating and singing . I have to say that I love our vocations.
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vacation
Vacations. We have a tradition in my family. Every summer we
get
pack
our bags
,
get in
the car
,
and go to the forest
and
make camp
. I don't like the mosquitoes
, but the others things are great.
today
Today
we are fishing
.
If
I
don't
want
to
say
do
say
so
myself
,
but
i
I
am very good at fishing. I got four fish already and it is only morning now
.
To
I
want
to see howmuch
many
I will
get
in
have
by
the end of the day!
While I was fishing , my dad made a firein
he
back
at
camp. Everyone is eating and singing . I have to say that I love our
vocations
vacations
.
to see how
While I was fishing , my dad made a fire
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vacation
Vacations. We have a tradition in my family. Every summer we get our bags , the car and go to the forest
make
to
set up
camp . I don't like the mosquitoes
, but the
others
other
things are great.
today
Today
we are fishing . I don't want to say
it
, but
i
I
am very good at fishing. I
got
caught
four fish already and it is only morning
now
.
To
I
want
to
see how much I will get in the end of the day!
While I was fishing,
my dad made a fire
in
he
at
the
camp. Everyone is eating and singing . I have to say that I love our
vocations
vacations
.
see how much I will get in the end of the day!
While I was fishing
Posted
vacation
Vacations. We have a tradition in my family. Every summer we get our bags
,
the
in
car and go to the forest
to
make camp . I don't like the mosquitoes , but the
others
other
things are great.
today we are fishing . I don't want to say, but i am very good at fishing. I got four fish already and it is only morning now
.
To
I
want
to
see how much I will get in the end of the day!
While I was fishing , my dad made a fire inhe
the
camp. Everyone is eating and singing . I have to say that I love our vocations.
today we are fishing . I don't want to say, but i am very good at fishing. I got four fish already and it is only morning
see how much I will get in the end of the day!
While I was fishing , my dad made a fire in
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