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I wrote some phrasal verbs in order to memorize them.

Yesterday, my friend called me and asked me out to get to know your company. Its name is Latan, and it is located in São Carlos city. By the way, São Carlos is near from Araraquara. The distance between them is 40 kilometers.

Today I'm listening to the radio, and I noted that the commentarist called Madalena said something that did not add up. I realized that the information that he gave was totally incorrect. 

I'm really breaking down with my university. It acted as a bad institution in a way that I'll take some grades next year and maybe pay some taxes for it to be enrolled again. 

The bus brought about an accident yesterday in my city. It injures about five people. So they are hospitalized and getting some medicines.

If I come across some old friend, it'll be a good idea to add him up for dinner. 

I really do not know why the marriage of my mother and my father fell apart. Moreover, I and my brother have suffered some traumas in relation to it.

Probably, I'll get through my work out until the end of the day.

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garlac12
I do not know why no one did a correction yet...
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Braden.Bylett
"I'm really breaking down with my university. It acted as a bad institution in a way that I'll take some grades next year and maybe pay some taxes for it to be enrolled again." I don't really understand what you are wanting to say with this sentence so I didn't directly correct it. How about "Im really struggling with university. It is a bad institution and Ill take the grades and pay the fees to enroll again next year"? Maybe someone else can help with this. And the sentence "The bus brought about an accident yesterday in my city" just is not something that english speakers would say. I would change it to "There was an accident with a bus yesterday in my city". Hope this helps!
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Braden.Bylett
I wrote some phrasal verbs in order to memorize them.
Yesterday, my friend called me and asked me out to get to know your his company. Its name is Latan, and it is located in São Carlos city. By the way, São Carlos is near from Araraquara. The distance between them is 40 kilometers.

Today I 'm was listening to the radio, and I noted that the commentarist commentator called Madalena said something that did not add up. I realized that the information that he she gave was totally incorrect. 

I'm really breaking down with my university. It acted as a bad institution in a way that I'll take some grades next year and maybe pay some taxes for it to be enrolled again . .???  

The bus brought about an accident yesterday in my city. It injures injured about five people. So they They are hospitalized and getting some medicines medicine .

If I come across some an old friend, it'll be a good idea to add invite him up for to dinner.

 I really do not know why the marriage of my mother and my father fell apart. Moreover, I and my brother have suffered some traumas trauma in relation to it.

Probably, I'll probably get through my work out until by the end of the day.
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Bella.Kay
I wrote some phrasal verbs in order to memorize them.
Yesterday, my friend called me and asked me out to get to know your company. Its name is Latan, and it is located in São Carlos city. By the way, São Carlos is near from Araraquara. The distance between them is 40 kilometers.

Today I'm listening to the radio, and I noted that the commentarist called named Madalena said something that did not add up. I realized that the information that he gave was totally incorrect. 

I'm really breaking down with my university. It acted as a bad institution in a way that I'll take some grades next year and maybe pay some taxes for it to be enrolled again.

The bus brought about an accident yesterday in my city. It injures injured about five people. So they are hospitalized and getting some being treated with medicines.

If I come across some an old friend, it'll be a good idea to add call him up for dinner. 

I really do not know why the marriage of my mother and my father fell apart. Moreover, I and my brother have suffered some traumas in relation to it.

Probably, I'll get through my work out until the end of the day.
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Nene.A
I wrote some phrasal verbs in order to memorize them.
Yesterday, my friend called me and asked me to go out to get to know your company. Its name is Latan, and it is located in São Carlos city. By the way, São Carlos is near from Araraquara. The distance between them is 40 kilometers.

Today , I 'm was listening to the radio , and I noted noticed that the commentarist called , Madalena , said something that did not add up. I realized that the information that he gave was totally incorrect.

I'm really breaking down with my university. It acted as a bad institution in a way that I'll take some grades next year and maybe pay some taxes for it to be enrolled again. 

The bus brought about an There was a bus accident yesterday in my city. It injures injured about five people. So they are hospitalized and getting some medicines medicine (or you could say "care") .

If I come across some old friend, it'll be a good idea to add him up for dinner. 

I really do not know why the marriage of my mother and my father 's marriage fell apart. Moreover, I My brother and my brother I have suffered some traumas in relation to because of it.

Probably, I'll probably get through my work out until by the end of the day.
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