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My main career goal Operation management and the second is to learn every day. I want to learn and to progress in my career. Operation management requires constant learning and improvement. Taking this course will help me to learn about Six sigma and also implement it in my job. This course will help me advance in my knowledge and will help me understand the principles and tools specific to Six Sigma and Lean. Identifying which aspects of Six Sigma and Lean seem most important and relevant to me. Walking away with a strong foundation in where Six Sigma and Lean is going, what it does, and how to prepare for it. This course will help me achieve it to learn. Six Sigma Tools for Improve and Control Courses on Coursera will help me to greatly increase Six Sigma and Lean knowledge, they are great. I want to improve my resume by completing these courses and writing them in my resume and collecting certificates to show them while required for a promotion or job interview. I am an enthusiastic and hard-working person who wants to make my career bright. This not only will teach me new pieces of knowledge, but also will help me to improve my language skill.

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Please help me correct ^^
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Essay for Requesting Financial Aid
My main career goal is Operation management Management, and the second is to learn every day. I want to learn and to progress in my career. Operation management Management requires constant learning and improvement. Taking this course will help me to learn about Six sigma Sigma, and also how to implement it in my job. This course will help me advance in my knowledge , and will help me understand the principles and tools specific to Six Sigma and Lean Methodologies . Identifying which aspects of Six Sigma and Lean seem Methodologies are most important and relevant to me is important . Walking I would like to walk away with a strong foundation in where Six Sigma and Lean is Methodologies, learn where they are going, what it does they do , and how to prepare for it them . This course will help me to achieve it to learn this . Six Sigma Tools for Improve Improvement and Control Courses on Coursera are a perfect fit for me because they will help me to greatly increase my Six Sigma and Lean Methodologies knowledge , they are great . I want to improve my resume chances for promotions and job interviews by completing these courses and writing them listing the certifications in my resume and collecting certificates to show them while required for a promotion or job interview . I am an enthusiastic and hard-working person who wants to make enhance my career bright prospects . This will not only will teach me new pieces of crucial knowledge, but will also will help me to improve my language skill skills .
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@leosmith thank you so much for the correction !!
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