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Tina

Tina is a smart girl that love eats sweet foods, just like cake and Japanese bread.But she fond she was getting too fat recently.So Tina think it’s time to eat healthier food now.So Tina makes a plan that eat less sweet food turn to eat more vegetables and fruits.

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Julius.Akin
Tina
Tina is a smart girl that love eats loves to eat sweet foods, just like cake and Japanese bread.But she fond found out recently that she was getting too fat recently. . So Tina think , she thinks it’s time to eat healthier food now. So Tina , she makes a plan that to eat less sweet food and turn to eat more vegetables and fruits.
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Char0mi
Tina
Tina is a smart girl that love eats . She loves to eat sweet foods, just like cake and Japanese bread baked goods . But However, she fond found out she was getting too fat recently gaining more weight at a dangerous rate . So Tina think thought it ’s was time to eat healthier food now . So Tina She makes a plan that to eat less sweet food turn to eat fewer sweets and substitutes them with more vegetables fruits and fruits vegetables .
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Brian.Mitchell
Tina
Tina is a smart girl that love eats loves to eat sweet foods , just like cake and Japanese bread .But , but she fond found that she was getting too fat recently .So , so Tina think thinks it’s time to eat healthier food now. So Tina makes a plan that to eat less sweet food turn fewer sweets and to eat more vegetables and fruits.
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TheLivingEcho
Tina
Tina is a smart girl that love eats who loves eating sweet foods, just like cake and Japanese bread. But she fond found that she was getting too fat recently. So , Tina think thinks it’s time to eat healthier food now .So , and Tina makes a plan that to eat less sweet food and turn to eat eating more vegetables fruits and fruits vegetables .
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