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Tina
Tina is a smart girl that love eats sweet foods, just like cake and Japanese bread.But she fond she was getting too fat recently.So Tina think it’s time to eat healthier food now.So Tina makes a plan that eat less sweet food turn to eat more vegetables and fruits.
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I'm not sure if this is an actual rule, but when having "fruit" and "vegetables" in a list, fruit is usually put first. So it would be "eat more fruits and vegetables"
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Tina
Tina is a smart girl that
love
eats
loves
to
eat
sweet foods,
just
like cake and Japanese bread.But she
fond
found
out recently that
she was getting too fat
recently.
.
So
Tina
think
,
she
thinks
it’s time to eat healthier
food
now.
So
Tina
,
she
makes a plan
that
to
eat less sweet food
and
turn to
eat
more vegetables and fruits.
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Tina
Tina is a smart girl
that
love
eats
.
She
loves
to
eat
sweet foods,
just
like cake and Japanese
bread
baked goods
.
But
However,
she
fond
found
out
she was
getting
too
fat
recently
gaining
more
weight
at a dangerous rate
.
So
Tina
think
thought
it
’s
was
time to eat healthier
food now
.
So
Tina
She
makes a plan
that
to
eat
less
sweet
food
turn
to
eat
fewer
sweets
and
substitutes
them
with
more
vegetables
fruits
and
fruits
vegetables
.
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Tina
Tina is a smart girl that
love
eats
loves
to
eat
sweet foods
,
just
like cake and Japanese bread
.But
,
but
she
fond
found
that
she was getting too fat recently
.So
,
so
Tina
think
thinks
it’s time to eat healthier food now.
So
Tina makes a plan
that
to
eat
less
sweet
food
turn
fewer
sweets
and
to eat more vegetables and fruits.
Posted
Tina
Tina is a smart girl
that
love
eats
who
loves
eating
sweet foods, just like cake and Japanese bread.
But she
fond
found
that
she was getting too fat recently.
So
,
Tina
think
thinks
it’s time to eat healthier food now
.So
,
and
Tina makes a plan
that
to
eat less sweet food
and
turn to
eat
eating
more
vegetables
fruits
and
fruits
vegetables
.
Posted
Tina
Tina is a smart girl that
love
eats
loves
to
eat
sweet foods, just like cake and Japanese bread.
But
,
she
fond
found
out that
she was getting too fat recently.
So
,
Tina
think
thinks
it’s time to eat healthier food
now.
.
So
,
Tina makes a plan
that
to
eat less sweet food
turn
and
to eat more vegetables and fruits.
Posted
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Tina
Tina is a smart girl that love eats sweet foods, just like cake and Japanese bread.But she fond she was getting too fat recently.So Tina think it’s time to eat healthier food now.So Tina makes a plan that eat less sweet food turn to eat more vegetables and fruits.
Tina is a smart girl that loves to eat sweet foods. She likes to eat cake and Japanese bread. She found that she was getting too fat, so she decided to eat healthier foods. Tina now eats more fruits and vegetables.
Tina is a smart girl that loves to eat sweet foods. She likes to eat cake and Japanese bread. She found that she was getting too fat, so she decided to eat healthier foods. Tina now eats more fruits and vegetables.
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