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My perfect vacation
My perfect vacation would be far away from a big city, near a turquoise warm sea. I would go there with my family to relax, to lie in the sun, look at the waves and do nothing. I am not a big fan of swimming. When I go to the beach I prefer to stay in the shade, read a book and drink something fresh. In the evening I like to walk around the town, maybe eat at some restaurant and observe the local people. The older I become the more quiet vacation I need. I wouldn't enjoy staying up until late anymore, go to nightclubs and drink alcohol.
My preferences has changed a lot during the past 10 years.
What about you? What is your perfect vacation?
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Sounds like a great vacation to me! If there was good surf in that warm sea, it'd be perfect!
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My perfect vacation
My perfect vacation would be far away from a big city, near a
warm,
turquoise
warm
sea. I would go there with my family to relax, to lie in the sun, look at the waves and do nothing. I am not a big fan of swimming
.
When
,
so
when
I go to the beach I prefer to stay in the shade, read a book and drink something fresh. In the evening I like to walk around the town, maybe eat at some restaurant and observe the local people. The older I become the more
I need a
quiet vacation
I need
. I wouldn't enjoy staying up until late anymore,
go
going
to nightclubs and
drink
drinking
alcohol.
My preferenceshas
have
changed a lot during the past 10 years.
What about you? What is your perfect vacation?
My preferences
What about you? What is your perfect vacation?
Posted
My perfect vacation
My perfect vacation would be far away from a big city, near a
warm,
turquoise
warm
sea. I would go there with my family to relax,
to
lie in the sun, look at the waves and do nothing. I am not a big fan of swimming. When I go to the beach I prefer to stay in the shade, read a book and drink something fresh. In the evening I like to walk around
the
town, maybe eat at some restaurant and observe the local people. The older I become the more
the
quiet vacation I need. I wouldn't enjoy staying up until late
anymore
,
go
going
to nightclubs
and
drink
or
drinking
alcohol
anymore
.
My preferenceshas
have
changed a lot
during
in
the past 10 years.
What about you? What is your perfect vacation?
My preferences
What about you? What is your perfect vacation?
Posted
My perfect vacation
My perfect vacation would be far away from a big city, near a
warm,
turquoise
warm
sea. I would go there with my family to relax,
to
lie in the sun, look at the waves and do nothing. I am not a big fan of swimming. When I go to the beach I prefer to stay in the shade, read a book and drink something fresh. In the evening I like to walk around the town, maybe eat at some restaurant and observe the local people. The older I become the more quiet vacation I need. I wouldn't enjoy staying up
until
late anymore,
go
going
to nightclubs
and
drink
,
nor
drinking
alcohol.
My preferenceshas
have
changed a lot during the past 10 years.
What about you? What is your perfect vacation?
My preferences
What about you? What is your perfect vacation?
Posted
My perfect vacation
My perfect vacation would be far away from
a
the
big city, near a
warm,
turquoise
warm
sea. I would go there with my family to relax,
to
lie in the sun, look at the waves and do nothing
.
;
I am not a big fan of swimming. When I go to the beach I prefer to stay in the shade, read a book and drink something fresh. In the evening I like to walk around
the
town, maybe eat at
some
a
restaurant and observe the local people. The older I become the more quiet
a
vacation I need. I
wouldn
don
't enjoy staying up until late anymore,
go
going
to nightclubs
and
drink
or
drinking
alcohol. My preferences
has
have
changed a lot during the past 10 years. What about you? What is your perfect vacation?
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