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Minimal lifestyle
Have you ever heard of "minimal lifestyle"?
This lifestyle is nowadays becoming popular in Japan, especially among young women. The definition of minimal lifestyle is life with a minimal amount of consumption of materials. What we call "minimalists" have their interest in keeping things very simple. To be a minimalist, the first step to be taken is to organize unnecessary items. The concept of minimalism comes from the Buddhist religion and we call it "断捨離-Dansyari" in Japanese. Minimal lifestyle will definitely be the alternative choice for those who get tired of a materialistic lifestyle.
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Minimal lifestyle
Have you ever heard of "minimal lifestyle"? This lifestyle is
nowadays
becoming popular in Japan
nowadays
, especially among young women. The definition of minimal lifestyle is life with a minimal amount of consumption of materials.
What
we
call
These
so-called
"minimalists"
have
their
interest
are
interested
in keeping things very simple. To
be
become
a minimalist
,
the
first
step
to be taken is to organize
one
must
eliminate
unnecessary items. The concept of minimalism comes from the Buddhist religion and we call it
"断捨離-Dansyari"
断捨離
(dansyari)
in Japanese. Minimal lifestyle will definitely be the
alternative
preferred
choice
for
of
those who get tired of a materialistic lifestyle.
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Very well written Yuka! My corrections are mostly just making things sound a little more native-like.
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