Write & CorrectJapanese
私
こにちわ！おなまえはえみです。私のえめはとてもかわいいです。かれはしろ。ありがとございます！
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私
こ
ん
にち
わ
は
！
お
私の
なまえはえみです。私の
えめ
（いぬ？ねこ？）
はとてもかわいいです。かれはしろ
いです
。
あり
よろしくおね
が
とござ
い
し
ます！
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Notes:
1. お- is used to talk politely about someone else, you don't normally use it for yourself.
2. If you're speaking in polite register (-です/-ます) don't forget to do so in every sentence.
3. Not sure what you meant by えめ, some kind of animal I assume?
4. You can only say ありがとう when you've already received something. If something has yet to happen, use よろしく instead.
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