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My family
I have six children.i married about 12 years ago..i am very happy with my family.my husband is very loving and careful.
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Hi Munir! Wow, I'm happy for you. :)
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My family
I have
six
children.i
been
married
about
12
for
twelve
years
ago..i
now,
with three children. I
am very happy with my family
.
and
my husband is very loving and
careful
caring
.
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My family
I have six children.
i
I
married about 12 years ago
..i
.
I
am very happy with my family.
my
My
husband is very loving and
careful
caring
.
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This is great! You only really needed help with some punctuation and capital letters. For casual talk, this is good.
To express your ideas better, I suggest you re-arrange them this way:
1. I married about 12 years ago.
2. My husband is very loving and caring.
3. We have six children.
4. (say something nice about the kids)
5. I am very happy with my family.
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