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I made it because I just survived this year.
Do you sometimes think why you live?
There is no special reason to live, we just live because we exist.
But It is important how you live. To live happy or to feel depressed in life, It's your choice.
Therefore , when you are awake in the morning , you should thank for having another new day and
Just try to think how you spend today.
You have succeeded because you also have survived today and this year!
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That's a big improvement since your last writing, man. :) I wanted to help with some capitalisation and phrasing.
Also, thanks for the inspiring message :)
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I made it because I just survived this year.
Do you sometimes think why you live? There is no special reason to live, we just live because we exist. But
It
it
is important how you live. To live
happy
happily
or to feel depressed in life,
It
it
's your choice. Therefore
, when you are awake in the morning
, you should
thank
be
thankful
for having another new day and
Just
just
try to think how you spend today. You have succeeded because you
have
also
have
survived today and this year!
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Thank you so much!
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