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I just want to share what u did today. I shipped my package in the morning. After that, I had two lessons. In the afternoon, I had a long nap and talked with my family in a group call. In the evening, I am lazy to go out to have dinner, so I ordered food online, unluckily, I had stomachache after the food, maybe because I had too much since I have been on diet over a month, I lied in bed for an hour then I felt better. Now I am ready to sleep.☺️
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Day4
Day Four
I just
want
wanted
to share what
u
I
did today. I shipped
my
a
package in the morning. After that, I had two lessons. In the afternoon, I had a long nap and talked with my family in a group call. In the evening, I
am
was
too
lazy to go out to have dinner, so I ordered food online
,
unluckily
.
Unfortunately
, I had
stomachache
a
stomach ache
after
the
food,
eating.
This
maybe because I had too much
since
I
have
to
eat
after
having
been on
a
diet
for
over a month
,
.
I
lied
laid
in bed for an hour
,
and
then I felt better. Now I am ready to sleep.☺️
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Day4
Day 4
I just want to share what
u
I
did today. I shipped
my
a
package in the morning. After that, I had two lessons. In the afternoon, I
had
took
a long nap and talked with my family in a group call. In the evening, I
am
felt
lazy to go out to have dinner, so I ordered food online
,
unluckily
.
Unluckily
, I had
stomachache
stomach
ache
after
the
food
I
ate
, maybe because I had too much
since
.
It
felt like a lot because
I have been on diet over a month
,
.
I lied in bed for an hour then I felt better. Now I am ready to sleep.☺️
Posted
Day4
I just want to share what
u
I
did today. I shipped my package in the morning. After that, I had two lessons. In the afternoon, I had a long nap and talked with my family in a group call. In the evening, I
am
was
lazy to go out
to
have
for
dinner, so I ordered food online
,
unluckily
.
Unluckily
, I
had
stomachache
developed
a
stomach ache
after the food
,
maybe
.
It
could be
because I had too much since I have been on diet over a month, I
lied
laid
in bed for an hour then I felt better. Now I am ready
to
for
sleep.☺️
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