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Nery.Fernanda

My fell school bag

Leila woken up late for school. She fast ride a bike and that your school bag fell on the street. She isn't see this. Leilar hear someone shouting:
" Stop!!!!your school bag".
Leila stop your bike and return to catch the schoolbag.

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My fell school bag School Bag Fell
Leila woken woke up late for school. She fast ride a rode her bike and so fast that your her school bag fell on off onto the street. She isn didn 't see notice this happen . Leilar hear Leila heard someone shouting: " Stop !!!!your ! Your school bag ! " .
Leila stop your stopped her bike and return returned to catch the schoolbag retrieve her school bag .
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Nery.Fernanda
thank you very match
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